Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my writing.

Lolly the Whale

One windy day in the ocean lived a happy whale called Lolly. Lolly has a friend called Polly. They were friends together. One day they were swimming together doing nothing and last night they were breathing up in the sky. They were happy.

It is easy to add detail to my story. It tells people more about my story. I like it.